Mind Games Comments

The imagery in this poem is simply breathtaking. Nature n humanity share a love hate relationship which you have illustrated through lovely images. Loved it.

Beautiful imagery and the description of the human mixing into it. You painted another layered picture with your words.

The blue sky with dancing clouds reflected in the shallow glassy surface of water in a secluded corner of a field, away from the noise and deceit of the madding crowd has such a calming effect on you. The collection of water which is at the mercy of the summer sun and fed by rain might go dry at any time. But as long as it is there, it invites your attention and you feel that it has a smile on its face inviting you to bask in its calm beauty. Enjoyed this lovely poem!

Calm tranquillity, a lovely poem :)