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Relax, young Allan alias Ali! What makes you think Swaami Vivekaananda is writing about you...? ...

Thanks, guys - back under a new title. It's all the rage.

Excellent post Michael...timely as well kenneth

darshana and a bit of vidya, OJ? And I'm very flexible on strict rhyme if there's something to be said...for me, a colloquial flow counts more - since everybody has blank verse in their schoolday past!

Very nice! ! ! ! - all in the mind, Richard

How about 'Pre-Packaged', Michael. Either way, I like this sonnet. It's a more modern version with the ABXB rhyme scheme, but still satisfying, my friend.

Very clever poem, Michael. I agree with Robert about the title. I don't know, maybe 'Poet in A Box.'

Please suggest a title - I've changed it twice!