Sunday, May 6, 2007

Mind Games Comments

Rating: 4.0

Like a flash in the dark
Erects my mind
Penetrating into the oblivion
Of a lonely day
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Joan Marques
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Matt Johnston 13 April 2008

These poems are worth reading if only for the style. This one is good; but, in my humble opinion it weakens in the last six lines.

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Joan Marques

Joan Marques

Paramaribo, Suriname
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