Thursday, October 18, 2012

Mind-Full Folly Comments

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- I'm quite uncertain
if I've ever had an original thought.
Perhaps I have, but then missed it,
or worse yet, forgot it.
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Smoky Hoss
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Patti Masterman 07 November 2012

It's a soliloquy I think. Mortals depend on their poets to show them the deeper mysteries, and I enjoyed how you followed the train of reason to end in two lines worthy of Shakespeare himself! (whoever 'He' might have been)

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Valerie Dohren 30 October 2012

Our minds certainly do seem to be difficult to control, unless one is gifted in the art of meditation and mindfulness. It is usually only when our senses go wrong that we become aware of how wonderful they are. An excellent write Smoky.

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