Mind And Emotion Comments

This may look easy at first, but gets deeper as one tries to delve into it. Good job.

wow this is really good! It somehow flowed easily, and I really enjoyed reading this!

Yes, Romeo, very well written.

(Plucked at the peak of sadness) , I like this line...emotions suppressing the thoughts and sometimes stabbing my consciousness of conscience also... Really a wonderful poem. A vivid write... Enjoy a lot...

and the formless begats form! ! good poem.