Saturday, October 25, 2014

Mind Albums Comments

Rating: 5.0

11: 29 a.m.
Writing into depths of this being, taking many
memories and images into the albums of a mind.
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Daniel Brick 26 October 2014

Your poem is framed by a time designation of 11: 29 - Does this refer to the simultaneous flow of time within, in contrast to its plodding movement for us in daily life? Certainly, your poems suggests things are tumbling into the mind and filling metaphorical albums. Someday these mental treasures may come out of the mind as poems. For the time being they will exist in the mind and gather value the longer they luster within..

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 25 October 2014

Two thing mixed memories and hop and beautifully projected - memories and images into the albums of a mind. thank you lovely

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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