Mind Poem by Govind Ramakrishnan

Mind



Every day
I desperately seek
The space between
Each successive thought

A sacred sanctum
Where mental afflictions end
And true awareness begins,
In its abidance
Even the foremost
Among all thoughts,
The 'I' thought,
Evaporates

© 2016

Saturday, May 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: spirit
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 06 June 2016

I is most likely an illusion. Disappointing but a revelatory thought

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Stephen Park 07 May 2016

That space between thoughts is sacred Govind. Wise observation for a young man. Loved your poem.

102 14 Reply
Guru Kothandaraman 07 May 2016

Truly deep and mind blowing poem. You are right, bliss is the space between two thoughts. it is best experienced in deep sleep when the mind subsides.

116 15 Reply
Edward Kofi Louis 07 May 2016

Each suggestive thought! Using the mind very well. Thanks for sharing.

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