Monday, December 4, 2017

Mind 4 - Mind A Slave Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mind behaves like a slave
If entangled in flow of thoughts,
Carried away by the intensity of emotions,
Into shores of unpredictable destinations.
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon
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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 October 2021

It's an insightful piece of work dear madam... thanks for sharing..5 stars

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Loke Kok Yee 19 January 2018

This poem sat in my mind for awhile and I gave it much thoughts. It had became a slave to your poem, therefore; you are correct about the mind behaving like a slave. Thanks Geeta.

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Yiyan Han 05 January 2018

Mind behaves like a slave Could act like a master ... ;)

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Yes Yiyan, Mind behaves like a slave. But certainly, with strong determination and will power, mind can be a Master too. Thank you, Yiyan

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Tom Allport 21 December 2017

a very thought provoking write that is full of good advice? .............well penned Geeta

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Tom, so good of you to read this poem and comment on it. Thank you so much. Stay blessed.

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 December 2017

So true. Nice poem with a nice flow. Loved it.

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Anil, thank you so much for your nice comment.

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Rini Shibu 04 December 2017

Well penned on mind and emotions Geeta

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Thank you Rini. Your comments are always sweet and nice.

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