Thursday, January 27, 2022

Millions Dream Fall And A Million Eyes Watches ~ Comments

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When the moon rests on the cold clouds
The dark night sees the light through a prism
The shivering trees shred the leaves
From the window panes I see the dewdrops
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M. Asim Nehal
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Ruta Mohapatra 28 January 2022

The last line is really beautiful!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 28 January 2022

A poem both mystical and magical, dear Asim ji......10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 28 January 2022

As the warmth of the earth embraces them Millions dream fall and a million eyes watches....

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Shreya Hacks 27 January 2022

Yet another poem on winter magic.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 January 2022

Beautiful and thought provoking poem embellished with fascinating images and metaphors.

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David Wood 27 January 2022

Millions of eyes with wants and needs all going about life looking for the same thing but in many different ways.

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