Thursday, September 15, 2016

Million Deaths Comments

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I see birth of my million deaths,
I shall die million times,
before I really die.
The pain that I shall no more see
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rajnish Manga 18 September 2016

Earlier I had read about a million mutinies and now it is 'Million Deaths'. What a wonderful articulation of thoughts about parting with nature's charming tapestry, love, progeny and many more things at the time of ensuing death. It is, at times, very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing, Sir.

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Kelly Kurt 15 September 2016

An interesting perspective. I hate the thought that one day I will no longer have consciousness and be able to think. In fact, it scares me.

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Khalida Bano Ali 15 September 2016

A philosophic thought...........................................................

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 September 2016

This Earth is beautiful. But death gives pain that we see billion times again and again. This provokes thought. Pink petals of love should kiss foreheads and this fear should go away as death birth and death balance in Earth. Very thought provoking as well as amazing poem this is....10

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