Million Daffodils Comments

Your muse is really kind to you that let you pen down so nice a verse we enjoy and admire. Am I a best mind to solve you right, dear friend? :)

A cascading flow in writing and sounds in rythem of words.

Best minds will solve me right true! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

You are beautiful, unpredictable, formidable, exciting and a wonderful POET.

Every day I keep on learning, life is my teacher so true. nice write.

Shahzia, this is beautifull. Remember, only those people dies who cannot learn anymore. You are still young and your brain can take in so much more, Just keep on dwelling on beauty, harmony, flowers, and lovely things, forget the problems of the world, because they are with you only if you keep them alive in your mind. And when you are in that peaceful place all the time, it will come to you in reality also. What we dwell on, we get it.

What an amazing poem that gives alot about who you are. Thank you.

So many comments :) And do not take me light! ! ! If they read you and learn you no one will.

Dear Bard, I have a varied thought looking at your poem. I believe, you have not yet identified your real SELF. The pursuit is still ON. What you felt, what you have versed is just one tender realm of your thoughts, but the precious depth is still to be explored. I am sure you might well be excavating, dissecting, exploring many a human moods, thoughts, passions, nature and verses not for any comparison, but for realizing your real SELF. Exceptional enthusiasm would one day board the chariot of your poetic excellence, You will ride over generations still knowing not fully who you have always been, but, futurity would submit their respect for the merits rather ambiance of your blessed verses for ever more. God Bless.

Shahzia, a great philosophical question is answered in simple attractive terms! VERY WELL WRITTEN!

A nice poem, I enjoyed it. It's always difficult to know thy self -A

This was a most interesting poem. I loved reading it. Loved the imagery in it. flowers and gun..... What a contrasting comparison! Well Done

You take it in different level, sounds as who i am as no one as you are, it's original...that's you..Great! _Soul

Last few lines made me smile. A beautiful poem penned. You know yourself better.

Nobody takes u light V all know u r heavy weight champ of PH...... Simple but deep and erudite Impressive as always.......

I am who I am. Nice descriptive write of who you view yourself to be in the journey of self, and self-discovery. Nicely written.

Experiences in life are one n same for all n expressing them in words do not require heavey words. A reader should not run for a dictionary to understand itz the similar experience s/he had. U write lucidly simplifying every experience n there lies it mark as a poet of the interior. Keep going, ms shazia :) P.S: for those who dabble in words, algebra is far beyond comprehension. This world is full of simpletons n u r one among them :)

Sunset is my favorite poem Daily writ by Nature Every day I keep on learning Life is my teacher This is what I also want to repeat! How well you have delineated yourself in such capturing verse! !

''I do not know the heavy words'' as you have told here that you do not heavy words but my assessment is that your language is fantastic when you write prose...it does not mean yr poem is weak, you use simple words that is because of many things one is of course poems comes from heart and we avoid heavy words penning down genuine verses.. i love this poem of yrs.. perfect 10

A pleasure to read this poem. Very genuine! ! ! !