Milky Way Comments

a wonderful creative right we are like the stars that shine bright? ...............well written Rini

A lovely poem, so nicely penned.

Oh! Very good! ! I like the metaphor going on here- it gives importance even to the most average of lives to see it set in the midst of the universe like this. Total originality and totally scenic! ! ! 10++++++++++++++++++

Where you are heading and where is the ending Life is so vast...universal. life and death is a great mystery. in between we fall in l ove. we have sexual union, and we think foolishly love will never end....... thank u for ur great thoughts.. tony

Rini, we have our own universe within our minds. We also have those around us who disappear into black holes and others who shine for us like the stars above. An imaginative write with great imagery.

Lovely poem Rini. Universe is a marvelous and exciting creation. To be part of it is amazing.

This is a very creative poem about Milky Way.