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A nice poem echoing inner feelings. beautifully written!

Fantastic poem Neela. I loved the beautiful lines...... The sky, the cloud, the rain, And my pent up pain, Must get condensed On the blank sheet To be a universal poem. I agree with Valsa's comment, this definitely is universal poem....... Loved the way you scripted each lines....

The sky, the cloud, the rain, And my pent up pain, Must get condensed On the blank sheet To be a universal poem. Beautiful lines.....! Then definitely it would be a UNIVERSAL poem!

Lifted nicely, smoothly The flickering light Calls me to join The fest of life, fame- -concluding Desir, hope and must say the soul of thepoem- The sky, the cloud, the rain, And my pent up pain, Must get condensed On the blank sheet To be a universal poem. 10