Monday, June 18, 2018

Miles Apart! Comments

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We both sit by the window gazing out
at the smiling moon each day as she shines
through a night of endless possibilities.
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Namratha Swamy
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Rajnish Manga 18 June 2018

I have been delighted by the fascinating images that the poet has created in the poem to describe a once robust relationship but still touched by the scope of hope and possibilities. Thank you, Dear Poet. night of endless possibilities / grotesque face of time / sun of our present priorities / as what has been loved can never be lost

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 June 2018

Namratha, such a splendid write....10++++

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