Wednesday, September 5, 2018

Mile Ho Tum Humko... Comments

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Mile ho tum humko bulandiyon mein
Kaise chor de yeh dil tujh ko
Zamaana kya kahe, hum kahan jane
Par tanhai hai in dharkano mein...
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Naila Rais
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Savita Tyagi 17 September 2018

Lovely display of conflicting emotions. Rhythm and rhyme add so much charm to it. Also thank you Naila for your comment on my poem.

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Naila Rais 18 September 2018

Thanks ma'am! Your words are always inspiring... Naila

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 16 September 2018

such a beautiful poem must come along with an ENGLISH TRANSLATION WELL DONE WE meet such ones as one in a million out of 7.5 billion

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Naila Rais 16 September 2018

Thanks! ! ! Will try to.... Naila

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 September 2018

thanks for accepting a trial young lady more will read ye so be happy

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Raj Swami 09 September 2018

Wah kya baat hai Bahut hi sandaar

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Naila Rais 09 September 2018

Thnx......................... Naila

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Unnikrishnan E S 05 September 2018

Hi Naila, Lovely poem on the pangs of love... Menfolk wohi hain, rah wohi hain Par tanhai hain in dharkanom main.... Beautiful expression....1000

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Naila Rais 06 September 2018

Thanks for reading........... Naila....

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 05 September 2018

Good..very good....kon mil gaya? jara hame bhi to bataye, , , , , ,

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Naila Rais 05 September 2018

Thanks for reading.... Haven't u read last line: par tanhai... jaane ki.... Mila nhi h.... Has gone.... Naila

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 05 September 2018

oh, , itni si baat hey, , , Ye to assi baat hey, , , Hamare zindegi mey jo chij hamare liye joruri hey oh reh jate hey, aor hamare zindegi mey jo chij joruri nehi hey oh chale jate hey...hamara khuda behtar zanta hey kia hamare liye fayda mand hey aor kia Nuqsan wala.....Khuda usi cheej ko hamesha rakhta hey jo hamare liye hamesha fayda mand hey......just take it easy.....

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