Mila Gay Comments

a very romantic piece..So beautiful. I love most these lines of yours..... When we kiss on Sundays, Ruby lips as sweet as sundaes, Her skin milky and creamy, Her fragrance makes me dreamy

really beautiful write. words have been used to give extra power to the poem. rhyming too voted10 surya

'A lover’s right, With all my might, Launch a thousand ships, Ready to defend her ladyship' 10 for this wonderful and bold idea.

So intimate and honest. Very beautiful and true. Good work

And when she smiles, Brightens up my day a mile, Sadiq's words are true, really a beautiful poem..............10/10.

This is a beautiful poem.10