Monday, November 30, 2020

Migratory Soul Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am also a bird, a red-crested rooster.
I do have wings, but not to fly.
They are just for flapping.
Even if I can't chant a song in tune,
...
Read full text

Harun Al Nasif
COMMENTS
Chinedu Dike 01 December 2020

Beautifully conceive and nicely crafted with artistic brilliance. An insightful piece of poetry written with conviction. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

0 0 Reply
Mahtab Bangalee 30 November 2020

O migrant bird of the Wood, My soul flies across the Pacific in a wink./// poetic is mind is powerful bird, it can fly and across the many.....///

0 0 Reply
Harun Al Nasif 01 December 2020

If you would have made a comment on the poem, that would have been better. I have my own point of view in using the word soul which must the connotation of mind. So it is not the word but the meaning which it implies matter.

0 0
Jazib Kamalvi 30 November 2020

Write comment. Such a nice poem, Harun. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

0 0 Reply
Harun Al Nasif

Harun Al Nasif

Bangladesh
Close
Error Success