Tuesday, September 5, 2006

Migrations Comments

Rating: 5.0

Somewhere, far beyond the sky,
Fledglings by the millions fly -
Testing wings and tasting winds,
Preparing for the foreign lands.
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Will Barber
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Not a member No 4 03 March 2007

Another astonishing example of your skills and empathy Will. Every line contributes magic to this euphonious elegy. jim

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Tailor Bell 01 October 2006

another of my favs...each time I read it there is some small new element found. captivating flow with deep undertones. beautiful work, Will. -Tailor

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Patrick Ladbrooke 12 September 2006

Excellent! A really sensitive feel to it, while capturing the unsettled feel of migration. Thoroughly enjoyed. Patrick

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Melvina Germain 10 September 2006

Thanks for sharing Will, this is a fabulous piece---Melvina

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Tranquil Ocean 06 September 2006

This poem has indeed taken wings and flown south to warmer heartlands! ! What a fine way and metaphor for conveying a beautiful message to a beautiful person... Sir, In awe of your fine talent. TO

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Sandra Fowler 05 September 2006

These words have wings, Will, to convey their inspiring message. This is a fine tribute to a gifted poetess. Warm regards, Sandra

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gone gone 05 September 2006

A lovely tribute from one fine artist to another

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Duncan Wyllie 05 September 2006

Awesome write by our fine wordsmith Sir Will Thankyou for sharing such a wonderful piece Love duncan XXX

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