Huge flocks of wild geese
Winged across the cloudless sky
Formed a V- shaped flight
Gathered their strength together
Defying the wild, wild wind.
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Long flights together in V shape amazes me everytime I see them during the winter season, yes they are great flyers. Very crafty tanka with great imageries.5****
Yes, I have seen them too, flying in great flocks to the warm south. So precisely forming a V-form. A fascinating poem fervently told but calmly rendered. A very beautiful Tanka.5 Stars fullest on Top!
Easy to view the flying geese and this wonderful lesson of nature! Excellent Tanka!
Togetherness gives strength is rightly said in these beautiful line.
A very enjoyable read. This V shaped flight, I ever read in your poemsite. It is like rereading that once so beautiful poem, brilliant Tanka presented. Thank you for sharing this gem. To My Favourites
I just awoke and discovered a most freshening and uplifting poem in Migration. Flight of wild geese to warmer places
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
What a Loveliest Tanka! So thoughtfully created and most beautifully presented in full brilliance and 5 Stars fullest on Top, dear beautiful great Poetess!