Friday, October 4, 2013

Migraine Malaise Comments

Rating: 5.0

Strobe light trees peripheral spread
Clear vision and opaquely flashed
Inside flicking on a malignant head
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Danny Draper
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Lyn Paul 16 October 2013

Another brain storming write Danny, hope this did not cause the migraine

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Valsa George 09 October 2013

Amazing description of such a shattering malady as migraine! The clinical symptoms are so correctly brought out! How it makes us averse to light and sound! Shutting up in a 'tomb' and slip into a death like sleep after gulping down extra strong paracetamol is the only solution to arrest this unyielding villain! !

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Patricia Grantham 04 October 2013

Seems to me like someone took a trip to the psychedelic shack and could not get back. An interesting write. Good.

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Ace Of Black Hearts 04 October 2013

Sounds like a really vivid bad hang over headache. Cheers to such wonder poem, awesome title.

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Kiama, New South Wales, Australia
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