Tuesday, April 27, 2010

Mighty River Comments

Rating: 5.0

From deep underground I start unseen
Cool spring water fresh and clean
My only life not visible to the eye
I start to flow, as if the earth did cry
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Vaughn Bekker
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Adeline Foster 15 May 2010

Ah! A mountian spring, what a lovely thought. Hope you find time to read my: Where the Polar Winds Blow. Adeline

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Matt Mooney 02 May 2010

A truly good river poem which flows on smoothly like the river itself.Nature is very well personified here.10.

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