Thursday, April 24, 2014

Mighty Blue Comments

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Terse winds were full, fought hard the sails
pure white as maiden gowns,
the ship and sea in courtships dance
no virgin pretense found.
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Captain Cur
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bri edwards 16 October 2018

favorite lines: whales laugh and dolphins smile. Flying fish create an arch mighty blue ..ocean? which one? and i'm not clear about the authorship of 'your' poems. are you 'pretending' to be a real (dead now) ship captain who wrote poetry, or did a (now dead) captain actually write them and you have 'translated' into 'modern English'. or is it a secret of the depths of the seas? ? to MyPoemList, bri :)

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Unwritten Soul 04 May 2014

Beautiful..captain..many claps from your crew_Soul

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