Midsummer Thoughts Comments
Everytime the flowers bloom you smile then they gone
Everytime green grows, then red and yellow fall
before shedding by the snow, and the cycle rotates.
I've learned what stay true for a tree are woody skeletons
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This poem' Midsummer Thoughts' is a brilliant poem having captivating expression bearing a lofty theme that life is a journey till we ended it. Thank you dear soul for sharing this valuable poem with us. Full vote.
Thank u dear, you are too kind to title it as a poem.... To me it just a compilation of thoughts that i constantly have and put in one page separated by.......... The language i use never good ones to be a poetry.. Thanks for appreciating my thoughts, acompilation actually... Thanks dear
Sensitive and beautiful " Midsummer Thoughts" Always wonderful to read your words.
Very impressive write, Unwritten Soul. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
I have read it before, so i read another piece of yours...Thanks Jazib, i appreciate it :)
The last four lines impressed me: 'Everytime fortune comes and go Everytime pain visit and leave Stay to to yourself, your core, your soul At the end that is the one that keep you strong, like woody skeleton'. - Loved your suggestion.
Thank you dear Khairul, midsummer thoughts is a compilation of this summer.... i thought nobody will like it and what you said make me feel motivated to write more...thanks a lot :)
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7/27/2025 2:39:18 PM # 1.0.0
There is something about mid summer that triggers nostalgia. Each season does seem to have its own personality. Adding to this poem is a great idea. Every mid summer can provide inspiration for...a work that is living and always in progress. A great work, Soul.