Glance to your heart
Ocean dark widen the sky
Swayed in nothingness tonight
Between earth and sky i am within
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Lost In This Melody! ! ! ! ! Every Time I Read! ! ! ! ! Ever So Heart Touching This Flows! ! ! ! ! With Such Beautiful Starlight That Glows! ! ! ! ! Both! ! ! ! ! And Always! ! ! ! ! Again And Again Wow! ! ! ! ! So Very Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
Talk about Heart s Melting! ! ! ! ! Mine is a puddle! ! ! was going to read poem of the day, before turning in but, ! Wish now to fall asleep with these Beautiful words in my head! What a wonderful Birthday Gift! ! ! You have A TRUE Gift! ! ! Thank You So, So Much for Sharing This! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++
Oh you made me smile with your kind and sweet words :) thanks Rebecca
Sweet Midnight's voice! ! With the melodies of life. Nice piece of work.
Wonderful thoughts go out to a worthy friend dancing in the dark of rellevent words...being a dancer myself it would be nice to read this work to the theme of the movie Pappilon..a beautiful waltz to dance to...regards
Soul, you're still at it, and better than ever! Terrific effort here!
Your pen is getting more and more boundless and immense, Soul! ! ! a precious gift! ! !
a dance at midnight wordy dance or what can I ooooo let us sing together nice lovely one
Dear Soul. How meaningful your words are. You will truly go a long way in life and I see Thomas loved your words
Obviously, you treasure this friend; I'm certain he feels the same way about you, and your poetry. An exquisite poetic dance!
A wonderful dedication to your poet friend ! ! Reeling in ecstasy in a sychronised waltz up in the moon(a romantic rendezvous for the pair to meet) in the midnight hour with a prayer that the sun sleeps for ever and that the night shouldn't be over! But then we will be in the dark, , , , , ! ! ! Ha! Ha!
A nice piece. You are really a good friend of Thomas.You take care of your every friend.Great Soul!
whe at a waltz, when the sun takes rest at Midnight, but the voices of giggling can be heard!
Yet another pen gem I liked the rise and fall almost a waltz in words and the word pictures you paint BB : O)
just recommenting you are right the friendship between to bound heart is much more stronger than every wine.that s the friendship makes you two dance till dawn, till the twilight shines on your souls. ~nb
a fine dedication poem. take this walts, take this waltz. once there is love how you two dance in the rain your soul will get back to eachother and you two will dance and drink(sure i mean tea hahahaha) cheers~nb
Wow soul a fab poem for him. so enchanting and superb to d end.
It was only after I had read 'About the poem that I figured out this was a tribute to a poet friend, misread it as dancing with the elements. When read that way the poem seems to be carrying both fear and fascination, mixed feelings. Beautiful lines :) , Soul.
A fantastic depiction and touching expression has been made in favor of birthday of your friend Thomas through midnight waltz. I cite....... A midnight waltz Once in a life time It will be the moment That will never be forgotten Forever ........Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing. Full vote.