Sunday, April 14, 2013

Midnight Waltz Comments

Rating: 4.6

Glance to your heart
Ocean dark widen the sky
Swayed in nothingness tonight
Between earth and sky i am within
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Unwritten Soul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 August 2018

A fantastic depiction and touching expression has been made in favor of birthday of your friend Thomas through midnight waltz. I cite....... A midnight waltz Once in a life time It will be the moment That will never be forgotten Forever ........Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing. Full vote.

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Rebecca Navarre 07 November 2017

Lost In This Melody! ! ! ! ! Every Time I Read! ! ! ! ! Ever So Heart Touching This Flows! ! ! ! ! With Such Beautiful Starlight That Glows! ! ! ! ! Both! ! ! ! ! And Always! ! ! ! ! Again And Again Wow! ! ! ! ! So Very Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Rebecca Navarre 10 October 2016

Talk about Heart s Melting! ! ! ! ! Mine is a puddle! ! ! was going to read poem of the day, before turning in but, ! Wish now to fall asleep with these Beautiful words in my head! What a wonderful Birthday Gift! ! ! You have A TRUE Gift! ! ! Thank You So, So Much for Sharing This! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++

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Unwritten Soul 14 October 2016

Oh you made me smile with your kind and sweet words :) thanks Rebecca

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 June 2016

Sweet Midnight's voice! ! With the melodies of life. Nice piece of work.

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R.j. Wynn 11 May 2013

I see why we call you Unwritten Soul.

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Ken E Hall 06 May 2013

Wonderful thoughts go out to a worthy friend dancing in the dark of rellevent words...being a dancer myself it would be nice to read this work to the theme of the movie Pappilon..a beautiful waltz to dance to...regards

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Valerie Dohren 24 April 2013

Lovely dedication to your friend, Soul.

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Scotty Dogg 22 April 2013

Soul, you're still at it, and better than ever! Terrific effort here!

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Shahzia Batool 22 April 2013

Your pen is getting more and more boundless and immense, Soul! ! ! a precious gift! ! !

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 22 April 2013

a dance at midnight wordy dance or what can I ooooo let us sing together nice lovely one

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Lyn Paul 21 April 2013

Dear Soul. How meaningful your words are. You will truly go a long way in life and I see Thomas loved your words

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Frank James Davis 20 April 2013

Obviously, you treasure this friend; I'm certain he feels the same way about you, and your poetry. An exquisite poetic dance!

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Valsa George 18 April 2013

A wonderful dedication to your poet friend ! ! Reeling in ecstasy in a sychronised waltz up in the moon(a romantic rendezvous for the pair to meet) in the midnight hour with a prayer that the sun sleeps for ever and that the night shouldn't be over! But then we will be in the dark, , , , , ! ! ! Ha! Ha!

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Neela Nath Das 18 April 2013

A nice piece. You are really a good friend of Thomas.You take care of your every friend.Great Soul!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 18 April 2013

whe at a waltz, when the sun takes rest at Midnight, but the voices of giggling can be heard!

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Paul Brookes 17 April 2013

Yet another pen gem I liked the rise and fall almost a waltz in words and the word pictures you paint BB : O)

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Nader Baheri 16 April 2013

just recommenting you are right the friendship between to bound heart is much more stronger than every wine.that s the friendship makes you two dance till dawn, till the twilight shines on your souls. ~nb

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Nader Baheri 16 April 2013

a fine dedication poem. take this walts, take this waltz. once there is love how you two dance in the rain your soul will get back to eachother and you two will dance and drink(sure i mean tea hahahaha) cheers~nb

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 16 April 2013

Wow soul a fab poem for him. so enchanting and superb to d end.

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Miroslava Odalovic 16 April 2013

It was only after I had read 'About the poem that I figured out this was a tribute to a poet friend, misread it as dancing with the elements. When read that way the poem seems to be carrying both fear and fascination, mixed feelings. Beautiful lines :) , Soul.

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