The whistle blowing in the night
The cargo whispers silently
Death closing in around them
Freedom growing nearer
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The rhythm is perfect. It's like the reader is one of the slaves running for freedom. And the suspense! You have captured the moment brilliantly. Excellent write, Joanna. You might like my Child Soldier; Killing Mine Enemy With Kindness
The rhythm is perfect. It's like the reader is one of the slaves running for freedom. And the suspense! You have captured the moment brilliantly. Excellent write, Joanna. You might like my
I love this poem and it is very amazing