Friday, April 16, 2010

Midnight Train (Slaves' Escape) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The whistle blowing in the night
The cargo whispers silently
Death closing in around them
Freedom growing nearer
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Joanna Hamilton
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(._) (_.) Eyes 16 January 2020

I love this poem and it is very amazing

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Richard Wlodarski 22 February 2017

The rhythm is perfect. It's like the reader is one of the slaves running for freedom. And the suspense! You have captured the moment brilliantly. Excellent write, Joanna. You might like my Child Soldier; Killing Mine Enemy With Kindness

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Richard Wlodarski 22 February 2017

The rhythm is perfect. It's like the reader is one of the slaves running for freedom. And the suspense! You have captured the moment brilliantly. Excellent write, Joanna. You might like my

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