Monday, June 2, 2008

Midnight Train Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wait for the midnight train in an abandoned station,
starring at the night with my pockets empty.

Something makes me believe it will take me to an island,
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 05 June 2008

Stunning, so beautiful.............thanks for sharing *10*

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Ben Gieske 02 June 2008

I like this poem with all the interesting thoughts and images as well as the sudden twists of events. A surprise ending with a nice slow, easing out of the experience.

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André Lopes

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