Wednesday, May 25, 2005

Midnight Thoughts Comments

Rating: 4.8

The clock has just screamed twelve,
I don’t know why it sounds so loud
In this empty room with the scattered dreams
And the dead TV.
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Ivy Christou
COMMENTS
Will Barber 13 May 2006

Absolutely a wonderful write. It draws me in. The mood is conveyed perfectly more than the mood, though - the experience.

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Lori Boulard 14 October 2005

Ivy, you confessed relating to my 'Poetry Fix'; now I see we're two of a kind! I feel this one and love the imagery, especially sleep playing 'hide and seek'. You are one of my favorite poets on this site.

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Seán O' Muiriosa 25 May 2005

Very good poem, Ivy. Your very right about this mixed-up, corrupt world we live in. Regards, Seán

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