Saturday, February 18, 2006

Midnight Snack Comments

Rating: 3.4

Over grahams and phantasm
For every bite, how I fly
To the world of fiction
Where candy-coated lines
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Marie Joyce B. Negapatan
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Gina Onyemaechi 18 February 2006

Marie, this is, quite simply an ace poem. The rich imagery, the flow, and the lingering feeling of quiet sadness that the reader walks away with. Oh, you're a good'un Marie. Well and truly. A 10 is no less than this poem deserves. Warm regards. PS You're another poet that I will study in order to improve my own writing. Thank you for coming here. Gina.

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Marie Joyce B. Negapatan

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