Wednesday, December 23, 2015

Midnight Seas Comments

Rating: 5.0

Slowly crashing, blissfully spreading
A sweet chill throughout bare feet
Slowly does the waves move
Charging and slowly retreating
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Margot Leison
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Chinedu Dike 25 December 2015

An insightful train of thought, well articulated and elegantly penned in poetic diction with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Margot. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Fidha Labeeb 25 December 2015

Thank you so much!

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Fidha Labeeb 25 December 2015

Thank you so much sir!

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 December 2015

And so I watch, under the evening sky The sea that stretch unto horizons beyond what my dreaming eyes can see And so I gaze in cozy wonder of blissful daydream Endlessly looking onto the kingdoms of the sea.. Very very poetic, great descriptions and poetic use of words. there is a flow in your writing. thank you very much for this poem. tony

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Fidha Labeeb 25 December 2015

Thanks a lot, sir! Merry Christmas!

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Fabrizio Frosini 23 December 2015

a well penned write your 1st here, Margot. Thanks for sharing and WELCOME at PoemHunter! :)

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Fidha Labeeb 23 December 2015

Thank you so much! :)

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