Slowly crashing, blissfully spreading
A sweet chill throughout bare feet
Slowly does the waves move
Charging and slowly retreating
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And so I watch, under the evening sky The sea that stretch unto horizons beyond what my dreaming eyes can see And so I gaze in cozy wonder of blissful daydream Endlessly looking onto the kingdoms of the sea.. Very very poetic, great descriptions and poetic use of words. there is a flow in your writing. thank you very much for this poem. tony
a well penned write your 1st here, Margot. Thanks for sharing and WELCOME at PoemHunter! :)
An insightful train of thought, well articulated and elegantly penned in poetic diction with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Margot. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
Thank you so much!
Thank you so much sir!