As I wonder through the trees
I hear a softly calling breeze
Come to me, come to me, it pleas
Weakly wondering, with all my might
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I rather like the way you eased into the darkness Shiny - really effective and well thought through. :) Best wishes
This poem is really good, and I love the title so much,10/10
I appreciate this morbid kind of thinking at least you have what it takes to spread your wealth...iip thanks you...
an evils side in which most have to deal with pleading to lead you astray which path shall you choose or will it plead you away a poem of light and dark write another for me
Stunning write, shiny. I loved the flowing imagery, and your lyrics..well what can I say but Bravo! ! ! ! outstanding writer...10+ best wishes Jon.
very well done! i give it a 20! lol keep up the good work
This is an excellant example of the creative mind being released. You have written a wonderful piece here and it needs to be recognized as such. I give it a ten. GW62
Pretty creepy, but an amazing poem.