Midnight Play Comments

Well written, I could see the picture in my head. Amazing piece

A silence captured- existential ocean deep with portent - Iiked this a lot

Wow! loved it. You got me thinking what that was. Great picture created.......... I thought what it would be.... A dancing aluminum foil! ... Well Written.

Lovely words, keep up the good work!

So true, how the midnight hour is so full of fear due to childhood stories. Reminds me of my poem, 'Phobia'. A wonderful write, well penned.

the moments feeling and fear properly captured and it explains how things can lead or mislead us in life....

Thats not the style of peotry im into, but interesting word choices.

enough to learn you're a rhythmic explorer of your well paid surroundings....this single poem is enough! ! ....

Vey effective! The spine chills, looking somwhat frightened, these feelings we have when sleep evades us. The haunting thoughts that break our sleep. Creeping noises that disturbs our souls. Our reliance on medicinal pills. Well done! 10

excellent flow you got

Very well written, the flow is so nice from the beginning to the end. Brilliant work! ! !

he he nice man...real nice...i liked the humour at the end and the word usage...way to go buddy

Ha ha. I'm sorry for your sleepless nights, just having one right now actually :) My cat would not stop 'meowing' so I had to put her in the laundry room. Now I can't sleep! Excellent poetry though Vijay! .... Marina Gasbey...

Yes! Some noises do irritate and give sleepless nights. Viz Calendars scratching the walls, under the fan. I would getup, pull it and throw it. But still the pages would flip and make some noise.I would put some weight and proceed to sleep, only to find a sleepless night. Nice Poem.

original in thinking and in selecting images and words. thank u for sharing

I like your style and originality. A very good work. Bravo! ! !

Its a really good poem and very desciptive that makes me picture the scene nicely done!

Your words are well chosen and descriptive! I had fun reading it! :)

It is pretty good. I like the description of the scene. Thanks for suggesting it. I give it a 9.

Hi Vijay, you've got a very descriptive verse here and dancing aluminum foil too! Nice write, I enjoyed. Frank