Tuesday, June 17, 2014

Midnight, Mid June Comments

Rating: 5.0

Curtains not touching
daylight still flooding
an Inverness room.
Midnight, mid june.
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Susy Evelyne
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John Brown 25 July 2014

I like it Susy, but I'm not sure about the word 'that' at the start of the last line. Could just be me of course, I'm no poetry, or grammar expert.

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Stephen Katona 19 June 2014

Scottish streams, waterfalls, fountains, mountains, lochs, and golden sunlight.... You've brought together so many wonderful things.

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Stephen Katona 17 June 2014

Susy, this poem is so beautiful! I feel like I'm in Inverness living one of my favourite dreams. I shall enjoy reading this again.

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Susy Evelyne

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