Wednesday, June 15, 2016

Midnight Madness Comments

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The blue sky melts westwardly
and espouses
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Bri Edwards 11 July 2016

time seems to fly pretty slowly when i'm at the end of a long line to get food at McDonalds. but, really, this is probably a very deep, intellectual poem, but i am too stupid to understand it well. but, i DO like the way it sounds, and i especially enjoyed the second stanza. oh, i see the topic is spiritual. no wonder it is not quite right for me. bri :) and the form: Allegory? wasn't he vice president of the u.s.a. once?

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