Thursday, April 19, 2007

Midnight Love Comments

Rating: 3.9

My sweet darling dance with me in my dreams
Hear the melody of love play or’ and or’
Watch the fireflies light our dance floor
Let the moon be our crystal ball, spin round and round
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Patricia Gale
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Marilyn Lott 02 June 2007

A wonderful romantic poem. Puts me back to long ago. I love it! Marilyn

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Michael Fischer 19 April 2007

This is my favorite poem from you yet. You captured the beautiful moment of you and your love perfectly. I really like the second last verse where you compared yourself to 'putty' in his hands and asked him to 'shape' you. Those were my favorite lines in the poem. Great job. Top marks and this goes on my favorite poems list...for good reason! -Michael

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Theodora Onken 19 April 2007

Enchanment of love at it's finest, dear Patricia! Blessings, Theo

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