Friday, May 11, 2012

Midnight Desire Comments

Rating: 3.5

To write my will
I have to stay up till
you come through the window after midnight
then i embrace you tight
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nader baheri
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Edward Kofi Louis 26 December 2016

Dejected! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anahita Tahmasbi 16 November 2012

A very nice poem, I personally find midnight to be the deepest and most mystical time we experience here on earth

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Sina Farajzadeh 18 August 2012

Hey there. I read your poem. It was amazing and good rhyming. I really appreciate your comments on my poems. Thanks.

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Captain Cur 20 May 2012

Very nicely written. God is all around us, we just have to open our eyes and hearts.

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