Vulnerable
And defeated worn out heart
Authentic lover so true
Sunset arrived much too quickly
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Kelly, you are correct. Your perception's are always spot on as usual. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Interesting. A little confusing- -I'm unsure who's blue- -you, or someone else, but overall- -I like your poem.
I could hear Billie Holiday singing this. Unfortunately, for one to write so well of this, it must have been experienced.
Edward, thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my words.
Pamela, thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment! You are greatly appreciated.
A blues poem....Midnight Blue. Yes, this could be expressed musically too. Great words and images evoked of a Broken heart. Nice musical flow.
Tempest! ! Worn out heart. But, there is hope ahead. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Brian, sorry if i confused you- . Thank you so much for reading it and commenting. You are always appreciated.