Midnight Comments

but of the sun that has been driven away The ending is perfectly written..it concludes all

Wow creatively described and depicted. The moon terms with your special effects and perspective, a different unique one indeed. Kudos. Nice to read from your pen again, I hope u will too my latest titled Ashura.

Beautiful flow of language I agree totally with Dan Full marks Sally

Very evocative and thought provoking. Nicely written and shaped.