Saturday, April 12, 2014

Midnight Comments

Rating: 5.0

Moonlight, night-light, star-lights, fire-lights,
Lamplight, candlelight, tea-lights. street light
He ignites all my lights at midnight,
Softening his kisses to fire my senses.
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Lara Valquez
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Khairul Ahsan 12 April 2014

This is a poem with a fantastic appeal! Liked it. Rated it 10/10. 'He ignites all my lights at midnight, ' - Simple but expressive. 'Breathes heated desire through me, Softly, secretly at Midnight' - Very passionate! I have a poem titled 'Midnight Voice'. I'll appreciate if you read it and say a few words

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