Saturday, July 30, 2011

Midnight Comments

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when you're young you believe every fairytale      
you view the world through a gently blurring veil
it is paradise, a lovely, peaceful place.
As you get older, you see the horrors you face      
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Joyce Rugg
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this poem is filled with sadness and darkness, i loved it. you have said some powerful things in this poem, just wonderful. you entered this in a compitition. this poem is sertianly wothy of such a compitition. good luck i wish you the best. just wonderful. i rated this a ten.

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Joyce Rugg

Joyce Rugg

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