Wednesday, December 21, 2011

Middle Of Both End's Comments

Rating: 5.0

Right in the palm of my empty hands.
Pass the chance of make to break.
Hope is whispers on fading winds.
Climb over correct to achieve mistake.
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Ben Burger 20 January 2012

As soon as I read the first line, I knew it was going to be be a true expireince. I've read it 5 times now and still get captivated every time. It is trully amazing what who have written and reflecting on your life. Well done, you are a true poet

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Victor Okechukwu Anyaegbuna 12 January 2012

A good poem. I like it.

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Vipins Puthooran 21 December 2011

A great poem! ! elegant penning! ! !

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