Middle Age Comments

I gave your poem a 10. It was well written and filled with wisdom. I also read your story about the family. It was half story and half poem with a lot of insight and potential. With a tad bit more work that could shape into a great poem. How cool is the internet! You live in England and I get to read your work here in the states!

Another excellent poem Sylvia, well crafted in rhythm and rhyme, an absolute joy.

Another great poem Sylvia! Love the fun, upbeat of it. I hope to reach a nice old age and fly past middle age.....I say I'll reach 100. We'll see! Sincerely, Mary

What a fantastic poem! Top knotch rhyming and rythm. Humorous and up lifting. This is what we want! ! Awesome stuff. Love Gyp's

Regarding the last line, Lord help me, I have reached old age! ! ! I love it, and often wonder why I thought it necessary to stay so young. I am retired, have tons on time to read and write, communicate with friends, and become a good friend to my grandchildren. What could be more perfect. Scarlett

Sylvia you have much good advice for all of us.thankyou for sharing your tallent.Love Duncan