Friday, October 27, 2023

Midday At A Brothel Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's midday outside a brothel
Pacing through the alleyway
Sunlight is cloaked in shadows
Of brick tenements
...
Read full text

Matt Render
COMMENTS
Richard Wlodarski 27 October 2023

The metaphor and imagery in this poem so superbly displays a wealth of emotions. It put me right smack into the middle of Kerouac's brilliant novella, TRISTESSA. Matt, this is very fine writing. Really enjoyed reading your poem!

1 0 Reply
Matt Render 25 November 2023

Thank you so much, Richard. Very high praise to be out in the same sentence of a writer of that calibre. That is a novel I really do need to get a hold of!

0 0
Close
Error Success