Monday, July 20, 2009

Mid-Winter Sunrise Comments

Rating: 3.4

You were my mid-winter sunrise.
You shone through the dark caverns of
My blinkered eyes. Your gentle light
Renewed the cycle of my life.
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Nomad Omnia
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Sonya Florentino 30 August 2009

i think you edited this right? The ending seems better now but I miss the 'blinkered eyes' phrase in the beginning....

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Patti Masterman 16 August 2009

Interesting meter in tthis poem that sounds so full of hope.

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Marilyn Lott 12 August 2009

A lovely winter poem, Nomad. Your rich, warm words draw the reader into your special story. Excellent - A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Sandra Fowler 01 August 2009

Beautiful winter words. You speak the language of poetry with depth and grace. Warm regards, Sandra

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~ Jon London ~ 21 July 2009

Nomad my friend...when it comes to imagery painted scenery...you never fail to deliver some of the finest work I've had the pleasure of reading here at PH...you are a very gifted writer my friend.....glad to have you back posting again......keep the coming 10++

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Sonya Florentino 20 July 2009

Nomad, i'm glad to see you post a new poem! you know i always check your page every now and then because I know I will love whatever you post and I was right! i just love the way your poems sound...it has inner music!

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