Wednesday, August 30, 2006

Mid Day Tears...For You Dear Ma Comments

Rating: 4.2

I seek comfort in your presence
in all the little things that we enjoyed together
Little did I know that it is your absence
that is binding me together
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s w a r o o p 23 October 2008

Hello, you have carved it very well... ur name and poem both reminds me something....and someone... there are few words which i wrote too... check that out.... keep your nice work keep writing...

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Kee Thampi 03 July 2007

The great love of this mum really makes a passion for us to love her, she is ours... And all the these little things that you have passed on to me are what keeping me free from life*...

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Catastrophe King 09 September 2006

Like I just advised Anirbit - There are many who comment with lots of negativity, you should be humble and forgive them like a true poet that you are! They know not what poetry is. I feel the same like Nalini and Tailo here - GENUINE! Its a very well composed piece - do not stop here..... there are 3 of us who feel you are a good poet. And - a 10 for your genuine heart.

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Vra Parody 09 September 2006

very amatuerish and sentimental...no humour...little rhyme (which got you some points) ...apart from that crap! ! !

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Tailor Bell 30 August 2006

heartfelt and genuine verses. hints of a lament...smooth and well delivered. great read. -Tailor B.

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Nalini Hebbar 30 August 2006

you have your memories intact...i live by those...though i will always remember her...love...nalini

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