Saturday, May 17, 2008

Mid-Day Surrounding Comments

Rating: 5.0

Silent street doused in yellow
Splashes on solitary pedestrians
Rolling wheels jiggle the silence
Scarily portending shivery fear
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Indira Renganathan
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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2020

Rolling wheels jiggle the silence and clarity of perception beatifies your expression. We hear the chirping from your poem in silence streets. An excellent poem is well penned..5 stars..

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 November 2019

Superb description of mid-day surrounding. Compelling imagery. Beautifully crafted and well executed.

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