After popcorn removal,
I spot you from
across the humdrum
of everything in
...
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only reminds me of where i would end up in Dante's Merry-Go-Round- round, & round, spinning, now you've made me dizzy. fine imagination and comparison with dante...... very very nice. thank you. tony
Fantastic flow of the thoughts and perspective presented through an equally captivating poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
An informal, everyday context that bites much deeper than the ordinariness of the images used to construct a darker, more profound collage. Well done, good poet. I suspect you are quite the journal-er. :)