Tuesday, March 15, 2016

Microwave Comments

Rating: 5.0

After popcorn removal,
I spot you from
across the humdrum
of everything in
...
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Vonnie Postit
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Seamus O Brian 09 March 2018

An informal, everyday context that bites much deeper than the ordinariness of the images used to construct a darker, more profound collage. Well done, good poet. I suspect you are quite the journal-er. :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 March 2016

Between us! With the fear of life. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 March 2016

only reminds me of where i would end up in Dante's Merry-Go-Round- round, & round, spinning, now you've made me dizzy. fine imagination and comparison with dante...... very very nice. thank you. tony

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Ratnakar Mandlik 15 March 2016

Fantastic flow of the thoughts and perspective presented through an equally captivating poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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