Micro Poems- 2 Comments

Shining and smiling! To respect the muse of nature. Thanks for sharing.

Good short poems are like thoughts and colors to me. Both never have an end.. these short poems are also very good

Good ones indeed! Loved (iv) . Great depth there. (10)

It's so beautiful and lovely. A nice poem.

You know before I saw your comment that my poem inspired you, I felt our common presence in these short poems, especially i and v, but it's whole ensemble that links us. But iv - I should have written that one on growing old! ! You're much too young to pen such thoughts. But it's a sign of your poetic sensitivity. I really like the closing of v with the ever shining stars smiling over the same circumstances that cause us to pause and feel melancholy. And 1 is so delicate I had to read it in a whisper.

Outstanding....Nosheen..No words to describe the depth and philosophy both, in your poem. All are equally good but my pick from the above will be: : (iv) The petals fall one by one The ground is hungry for more I close my eyes The mirror reflects my face too clear Oh, I'm growing old.

You have always been a talented writer, but you are taking leaps and bounds. Marvelous poem!

Very lovely - reminds me of Tagore.