Sunday, July 10, 2016

Micro Poems-1 Comments

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The stream flowed on its course
as I lost my way
in the vale of despair
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Nosheen Irfan
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 September 2018

U R no micro poet but a major one and at a macro level publish ur micro if you wish let the world share it as a luscious dish o what a fish such is any poets wish if only i could make one all will enjoy the lovely hot sun and enjoy my share as i do yours oh Nasheen it's like purdah nasheen Creative poetry we all have just seen

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 September 2016

In the vale of despair! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Geetha Jayakumar 04 August 2016

Beautiful lines.. The stars are bright I'm happy, their eyes reach beyond my skin I feel their light making a home in me. All are good. Loved reading it.

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Kelly Kurt 10 July 2016

For such a young woman, you write with an old soul. Wonderfully written, my friend

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Nosheen Irfan 11 July 2016

Thanku so much Kelly. I'm flattered you think me young. Lol.

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Barry Middleton 10 July 2016

Lovely. I like them all but especially the first. I like that you grouped them this way as they have a common theme of finding comfort and reassurance in nature. A 10

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Beautiful poems.Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 July 2016

I found peace under the trees! ! Nice piece of work.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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