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The stream flowed on its course
as I lost my way
in the vale of despair
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Beautiful lines.. The stars are bright I'm happy, their eyes reach beyond my skin I feel their light making a home in me. All are good. Loved reading it.
For such a young woman, you write with an old soul. Wonderfully written, my friend
Lovely. I like them all but especially the first. I like that you grouped them this way as they have a common theme of finding comfort and reassurance in nature. A 10
U R no micro poet but a major one and at a macro level publish ur micro if you wish let the world share it as a luscious dish o what a fish such is any poets wish if only i could make one all will enjoy the lovely hot sun and enjoy my share as i do yours oh Nasheen it's like purdah nasheen Creative poetry we all have just seen