Wednesday, September 12, 2018

Micro- Poem Comments

Rating: 4.4

Silence on lips
While heart is speaking
Emptiness in eyes
While heart is brimming
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Rob Lamberton 01 January 2023

Your lips are like a leaf…turning yellow into green!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 January 2023

Five Golden Stars for this Micro Poem and it deserves much much more! . This Micro poem has got a Mecro content in the few course of years and is becoming an Immortal Poem Worldwide, dear Nosheen! Enjoyed so much this Sterling Poem. My two thumbs up for you

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 December 2022

Sometimes things are not what they seem....yes you are correct. Focus on writing sans expecting readership. I wish you a happy and formative new year 2023 with happy poetry writing.

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Akhtar Jawad 19 October 2018

Sometimes things are not, a nice thought so nice penned.

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M Asim Nehal 18 September 2018

Awesome! ! Sometimes what we see is not the truth hence seeing is believing is defied. They speak not yet they convey....1000+

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Unnikrishnan E S 13 September 2018

How true! Sometimes things are not what we see... Very poignant thought.....loved it...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 September 2018

Wow! Really powerful expression is made here. Emptiness of eyes fills emotion in mind. Lips in silence fills vision in eyes. An amazing poem is excellently penned really.10

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Nosheen Irfan

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