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A kook in the valley:
a 'knock out 'and foxy Salley,
with knocked up belly,
lil bit junkie and acted as
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Bri Edwards 05 May 2015

i don't even know how i happened to be on this poem's page! last i knew (before taking a break) i was clicking on xelam's 'medusa' poem. both are about women..... i guess. Is the poet having nightmares of women these days? the title is misleading, but i'll forgive him. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Dictionary salley sal·ley \ˈsalēDefinition of SALLEY chiefly dialectal variant of 1sallow - - - - - - - - - - - ok, sallow: some kind of tree or color............ hmmm? maybe Salley in the poem is a typo, as later the poem mentions Sally. ========== 'dirty flick' = pornographic movie? =============== some parts a bit unclear, but quite entertaining. yes, i now see it was just for fun. Sally was luckier than poor Medusa! bri :)

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